tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2090318852004587149.post4650172899447682205..comments2015-04-07T11:51:25.429-07:00Comments on naked scribbles: death in the atticgentlehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04533617086781345963noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2090318852004587149.post-8836818379337399402009-01-20T23:36:00.000-08:002009-01-20T23:36:00.000-08:00lamenting laughters,and perfectly happy daughters....lamenting laughters,<BR/>and perfectly happy daughters.<BR/><BR/>Nice.Kodak Picturezzzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17914691255499651433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2090318852004587149.post-46194449365017913322009-01-20T03:19:00.000-08:002009-01-20T03:19:00.000-08:00hey gentle, where did you learn about my blog? i k...hey gentle, where did you learn about my blog? i know it's pretty much posted in bizarre places. ^_^<BR/><BR/>ang dami palang lit people dito sa blog. outside the academe, hindi ko talaga iniixamen ang tula. pinapakiramdaman ko lang. kung naramdaman kong may lalim at nagustuhan ko ang sinasabi, maganda na ito para sa akin.<BR/><BR/>at kabigan, dahil nagustuhan ko ang tulang ito, maaari ba kitang itala sa aking blogroll/link?<BR/><BR/>salamat.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2090318852004587149.post-50645460750358745532009-01-19T14:33:00.000-08:002009-01-19T14:33:00.000-08:00@Niel, I agree. I like oxymorons in poetry. And no...@Niel, I agree. I like oxymorons in poetry. And not everybody can pull it off. Most of the time, when I attempt it, it just sounds horribly affected. LOL.VICTORhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04123939120427864815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2090318852004587149.post-50822672876047417782009-01-19T00:30:00.000-08:002009-01-19T00:30:00.000-08:00I agree. :) And its a totally new way to describe ...I agree. :) And its a totally new way to describe a wall. Nice!Nielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16340191295121067673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2090318852004587149.post-63559452717479976882009-01-18T23:24:00.000-08:002009-01-18T23:24:00.000-08:00thanks neil. i replaced grief-stricken with "hungr...thanks neil. i replaced grief-stricken with "hungry". i think it suits the walls better; devoid of joy and sounding less scientific.gentlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04533617086781345963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2090318852004587149.post-24855264271889644032009-01-18T22:59:00.000-08:002009-01-18T22:59:00.000-08:00"its flickering tongue casts cold shadows""lamenti..."its flickering tongue casts cold shadows"<BR/>"lamenting lost laughters,"<BR/>I like the contrasts. Plus the images from the usual horror movie and ending with the words "perfect" and "happy".<BR/><BR/>I think you can have a more creative way of describing the walls other than grief-stricken. Kaw pa!<BR/><BR/>:)Nielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16340191295121067673noreply@blogger.com